This week I learnt how to write persuasive writing. This is my writing about the topic we were talking about.

Issue - children should work from the age of 8

I would disagree because some children can not take responsibility for anything.

Children are not ready to be in a business or own a business. Some children can not be trusted with money they could take money out of the cash register.

They should finish school first and they will be successful in if they own their own business. Children will have a better chance at owning a business if they are educated.

Children can not have a job because they will come in to work whenever they want to. They will always be late.

Kids have the rest of their lives to work and they should start at the age of 18. They should have fun while they're still young.